Thursday, July 10, 2014

By the sea-side

This is my first haiku attempted, thanks to the inspiration and belief of one of my co-author and friend,Amrit Sinha.

Thank you, Amrit :)

Hope it meets the standards and his expectations.

Never-the-less, this is indeed one of the most challenging, beautiful and creative form of poetry ever.

So, here it is:

"what can be deeper?"
i mused over the ocean spread,
"life"my heart replied

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  1. Amrit SinhaJuly 11, 2014 at 12:33 AM

    You are awesome with words ... what a wonderful first attempt this is :-)

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    1. asma ferdoesJuly 11, 2014 at 2:36 AM

      Thank you, Amrit :) it wouldn't have been possible without your support and guidance.

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  2. elly stornebrinkJuly 21, 2014 at 10:35 AM

    Awesome Asma! I mean that's amazing for your first attempt! And it's so exquisitely beautiful! :) <3

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