Prelude:
Here are two haiku reflecting the same emotion, speaking of similar feelings- an unrequited love/ the memories of a lost companion. What's even more beautiful, it can mean any beloved, and need not only be romantic.
While working on them, I got bits of both and I couldn't develop into one, so I framed both.
Now I'm not able to choose one over the other. So, please help! Tell me which of the two you find/like better? :)
The twin haikus:
>You remain with me,
Like fragrance of crushed roses,
Rays caught in rainbows
>You stay in my heart,
Like life within frozen lake,
Like droplets in cloud
Oh they're both lovely Asma! How can I/we choose? Really?! Besides, they're "twin" haikus, meant for each other! ;) <3
ReplyDeleteThank you, Elly :) that's so nice of you!
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