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Sunday, September 14, 2014

Maze of my own

This was what I was like the whole of last week.

Everytime I try to write,
I always get so distract,
I'm lost in a maze of my own.

My words take flight,
Then simply disappear from my mind.
They are lost in the maze I told.

I want to read and read,
Share, like, reply and comment,
But when I wish to write...

All is lost in the maze you know.

Then my dear friend Elly Stornebrink came to my rescue, and in the past two days, she did me a world of good. The below four lines are specially made and dedicated to her. Thank you, Elly!

Then I told my friends,
And amidst them a friend replied,
With her pep talks, aid and advice,
She brought me out of the maze of mine.

6 comments:

  1. Not surprised, dear Asiya it was Elly! You see, even when you are stuck you create thought provoking beauty! HUGS

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    1. Thank you judy :) but Elly really helped ne through. The credit goes to her :)

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  2. How adorable. And I agree with Judy. It must have been Elly :)

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  3. Oh Asma, you tickle me so. Thanks! I love your poems...I told you you could do it! I love and can relate to "My words take flight, Then simply disappear from my mind, They are lost in the maze I told" and I have a feeling a lot of writers experience that from time to time! ;) <3

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